As someone who writes books, I'd normally use quotation marks, and the person is obviously talking, so the first one should be correct.
Answer:
Include detailed descriptions of scenes.
Explanation:
Describing a scene can be an easy and useful way to slow down the pacing of a text.
Just because you can fly doesn't mean you can navigate. What if you get lost? >.<
Well for starters, it's written based on the writers memories of events, and a second trait would be that it is based on real events, it's not fiction.