The best answer for this question would be:
To achieve your dreams, you have to exercise, practice, and
make good choices.
In this big idea, the path to success leads to a lot of
practice and a lot of training from life experiences and even lessons from
different people, with that you can be able to make good choices.
One of the keys to following your career path is to be _____.
D. committed
It means dedicated and willing to give your time and energy to the cause that you believe in.
Armory is the correct answer I believe
We can always make time for what we need to do
This is very important: cut unnecessary things.
Answer:
(1) in the coolest home in the world.
(3). there is no way on earth I would want to do that.
(7) created electricity for him to recharge his
laptop.
(8) all over the world
(10) At this point in time
(11) "smell the roses."
Explanation:
Editing is described as the process of altering the text of a document or written piece in order to make it more precise, clear, and coherent.
In the given paragraphs, the six errors related to word-choice, abstract language, wordiness, or clichés are as mentioned above. In the first sentence, the word 'coolest' exemplifies a slang while 'there is no way on earth I would want to do that' reflects the use of 'abstract language.' In sentence 7 and 8, the words 'created', 'recharge', and 'all over' demonstrates the wrong word-choice. The sentence 10 displays wordiness in the use of phrase 'at this point in time' and the last sentence in the use of 'smell the roses' reflect 'cliche.'
