1) The improvement which was done to the bolded section in the sentence to make it correct is : Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns. As it shown in the example, there is no need to duplicate the subject 'father' as it is clear to which word the pronoun 'he' relates. We always try to enrich our speech, so it's better to say the same thing in synonymous form:hates is replaced with dislikes - all in all it sounds good, looks natural and preserves the meaning of the first sentence.
<span>2) The sentence which should be revised to eliminate redundancy is With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. A redundancy in a sentence is when something is repeated for no reason, when there is obvious detail that brings no sense and can be omitted. From the first sentence we know that sirens were needed, so there is no need to repeat that. </span>
<span>3) The statement which best describes how this sentence can be made more concise is : It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness. The phrase from which the sentence is started is quite long, and according to its meaning, there is a better (shorter) equivalent, which is 'if'. Now it is concise : If spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.</span>
She wanted to make it more realistic and have real facts based on what happened at his assassination, such as who killed him, why, what his wife did, where he was when he was killed.
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Because I actually read and figured out the language I can say..
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Dank je!!
Ik was ook dol op het citaat!
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Hi. You did not inform the text to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for it to be answered. however, I will try to help you as best I can.
It is possible to see from the context of your question that you are referring to "Romeo and Juliet," which, as you may already know, is a play written by Shakespeare that depicts the tragic romance between Romeo and Juliet, the children of two enemy families. In act 5, Scene 1 of this play, we can see a moment when Romeo makes a premonition. In this scene, he dreams that Juliet meets him, but he is dead, but she kisses his lifeless lips and makes him relive. In the last Act of the play, Juliet does indeed kiss Romeo's dead lips, but he doesn't come back to life.
answer- d
It does give the character a stronger sense of voice
