It looks really good but I think you should put a comma before ( like ) and I suggest to take the ( grave or ) part because it will sound a lot more better
It is a program which is youth orientated that helps them set an accomplish goals based of writing.
I wish the author would have answered , In what way do the cell phones for soldiers particpants help military families? Another question is, How did these teens get their start in these programs?
weak verbs: help is overused and could be replaced with aid. serve could be replaced with contribute, share could be replaced with experience
Answer:
Proteins are the body’s basic structural material and have many vital functions.
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