Answer:
it should be shorter and more to the point
It can affect your life in the business world in a lot of ways. If you have good rhetoric, you're more likely to be hired and you'll probably perform better since you'd be more persuasive and eloquent.
If you have poor rhetoric, you're probably less likely to be hired because you don't know the vocabulary or you're not very persuasive. You also might perform poorly (for instance if you had to sell something and you didn't have good speech)
Answer:
Mr Intzy was a mouse when it came to being in front of an audience. (metaphor)
The empty page stared at me, daring me to write on it (personification)
Snip, snip, snip went the barber's scissors (repetition of words)
The hiss of a snake started me. (imitation of sounds)
His head was spinning like a top (simile)
Explanation:
Well, as we know, after the battle between Theseus and the Minotaur, King Aegeus told Theseus to come back on the ship with the red sail to indicate that he was alive. Instead, Theseus's ship came back with a black sail. The black sail made King Aegeus that Theseus was dead. Theseus sailed away with a beautiful maiden girl, and sailed to rule a new land far away. Theseus created a more civilized kingdom which was less brutal then.