I would say it is too wordy. Try breaking it into 2 sentences or combining them better.
Answer:
A (or C, but I think A)
Explanation:
I would say A because a good thesis statement gets to the point and is short. For example, "Kids should get allowances." The thesis statement we are given is very long and has reasons in it, which is not what a thesis statement should be.
Answer:
Qith manufacturing productive activity slowing down due to global supply chain disruptions and closures of factories.
Explanation:
I would say that is a draft if you are referring to the writing part.
