What you can do is to follow the next steps: 1. write a heading with your data: it means name, occupation, location 2. after that say to whom are you sending the letter, in this case: The Environment Minister, Ministry of Environment, 3. Don't forget to refer as him as dear sir because it is a formal letter 4. You can start your letter saying: I respectfully request or I humbly request. Then explain what is your request and briefly state the reason 5. In the next paragraph, try to explain something reated to the ide of Animal welfare is an environmental issue as it plays a crucial part in the natural cycle and sustenance. Our earth, our health, our future is dependent on them. 6. Make sure to state what is not functioning well with the support of the ministry of environemnt. remember to state this with due respect and good manners 7. Write a short closing paragraph stating the appreciation for a positive response 8. close with a show of gratitude and finish with the sentence Yours sincerely, and then write your name
In colloquial English 'them" would be acceptable In formal English 'they' is used accompanied by the corresponding auxilliary verb So, you could also say Is everyone who works in this store as helpful as they are ?
