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You have to add the passage so we can read it.
well gilmesh uses his dream to make it into the plot
I think the incorrect pronoun shift would be the line "<span>before you adopt a pet". I think it should be before one adopts a pet. This is because the sentence started with "It is". The "you" made the sentence very confusing. The second pronoun should be singular, the pronoun you is often denoted as plural and not singular.</span>
