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AnnyKZ [126]
2 years ago
15

How can I make this paragraph better? Or what’s wring with it ?

English
2 answers:
tangare [24]2 years ago
8 0

Answer:

You could add more detail and use less fragments

Ad libitum [116K]2 years ago
4 0

Answer:

in order to be a good writer, every benefit you list should start a new paragraph

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