Answer:
The best way to revise the sentence is:
D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.
Explanation:
<u>The original sentence is not really defective, it is only missing a piece of information concerning when the car wash will be held. The best way to add it is to include it at the end of the sentence, as is done in letter D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.</u>
Let's take a look at the other options to understand why they are not usable.
Letter A does begin with the subject of the sentence, but interrupts it with extra information, preventing the sentence from being a direct one. It sounds really confusing. Letter B adds the "on Saturday" information at a strange place, also interrupting the direct flow of the sentence. Letter C puts the "on Saturday" information right at the beginning. It's not that this can't be done. But, in this case, a comma should be added after it. Nevertheless, it makes the introduction of the sentence too long, which is not a good thing.
Answer: so in this story Delphine goes to Oakland to meet her mother whom abandoned them on the way they met freinds went to mean lady’s Ming whom they called because of her temper about egg rolls? Weird right?. Then they went to a gather call. Blah blah blah. Big ma answers the call and asked them why depjine’s mother is not with them and then I think his father is their sleeping Delphine calls to let them know she is safe in okland hope I answered your question
Explanation:
Answer:
Hissed
Explanation:
A verb is a doing word, and hissed is the only doing word.
