I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
Answer:
stong thesis statement ; answers a major question related
to the literary work,is open to agument and states a claim that can be backed
up with evidence . now the weak it states facts about topic and focuses on a specific word. hope this helped and mark this brainlyest.
Explanation:
The answer is C, <span>"The waves beside them danced"</span>
The correct answer is D) Terry and Rowena met Craig at the mall, where at the mall is a prepositional phrase.
A prepositional phrase is a phrase which doesn't have a finite verb, and starts with a preposition, in this case at.
