The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt
above would be adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the
island.
To add, the Most Dangerous Game opens with a conversation
between two men—Whitney and
Rainsford.
Anne Sullivan was frustrated because she felt that they need more time for Helen to learn how to communicate and behave effectively. At the begging, Anne’s work at the Keller’s house was constantly interrupted by the stubborn attitude of his father, in attending all of Helen’s demands. As a result, Anne requested an isolation period with Helen. Helen's father sent them to a nearby property for two weeks. During this time, Helen learned some words by spelling it in her hand. Additionally, Anne taught her some basic rules of behavior such as table manners. Despite this remarkable progress, Helen was just repeating the spelling taught by Anne. Within two weeks, Helen's parents went to bring her back to their home. However, Anne felt that more time was needed for Helen to learn how to communicate by herself.
Answer:
I think it will be very risky
1. When Macbeth moved to Inverness, you can already see his influence from his entrance. The second act centered around his influence. Even though there were other characters in the story, Macbeth continued to influence everyone in the scene.
2. Symbolically, Macbeth's entrance had darkened the atmosphere. His entrance brought darkness and gloominess. The brooding darkness was intensified in the battle scene Banquo and his assassin.
I think the answer is: A - balanced
