I'm going to write a poem. X3
There once was a Whale named Jim.
Who didn't know how to swim.
Try all he might,
It just wasn't right,
Oh, how life was hard for him.
I think you should say “she accepted her invitation” instead of request. Maybe a little more background story? Unless you’re gonna make it into like a detective story where the short story makes a bigger picture. Maybe instead of her getting lost so soon, she meets up a friend, they both get lost, eventually meet the clown. You did great I like it so far, but its the little details that add that pizzaz. Ex: At that moment Samantha had realized her mistake, as she spent the time trick or treating the sky grew dark and ominous, a feeling like she had never felt before, true fear.
The 2 sentences would be:
1. I was happy because i passed the test, which i studies for. So, this sentence shows how he/she is very joyful, excited.
2. I'm going to on a trip to Canada, but i'm not taking you with me. So this sentence shows how the mood could be mad, sad, angry.
*Hope this helps! Mark me brainliest!!!!!
