Question

PLEASE HELP ON MY SCIENCE CONCLUSION IS IT GOOD? In my experiment how does liquid on plant growth I, in the beginning believed that the plant fed with sugar water would have the most influence on growth. But the data showed different. In fact the plant that was fed with 50 milliliters of water Has shown .3cm of growth over the course of one week. Now, compared to the control; the plant that was fed with 50 milliliters of water has grown 1.8cm over the course of one week. Though the other two subjects have decreased in height. one being the plant fed with sugar had decreased by 1.9cm. over the course of one week this has probably occurred due to the plant because When the solution is highly concentrated then exo-osmosis occurs leading to wilting of the plant whereas when the solution is less concentrated then the plant cells become very congested and swollen this leading to the plant losing its stability and therefore it has shrunken and shriveled. But the plant fed with salt has pretty much “died” because the salt dehydrated the plant and the following day “collapsed” and started turning brown the following days. Now, in the end it turns out that it is best to stick with the water rather than the coke because over long terms it may cause damage to your plant(s) cells and congest them because there is 5.3 grams of sugar in the coke and various other added sweeteners that may cause harm.

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Answer:

It's a good conclusion, you gave all the data needed to understand your expirement and it's results, as well as explaining why you thought that you reached the result you did. You have a few grammar mistakes (Missing commas, un-needed commas, and random capitalizations), but other than that, good job!

-Jack