Answer:
The third option.
Explanation:
"concise" means quick, or to describe something in a short manner.
Answer:
Stacey got all of the groceries for the week: milk, eggs, fruit, cereal, and meat.
Sam stayed up late studding for all the tests he has : Geometry, ELA, Art, and Computer Science.
Hope this helped :)
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
I'd go with B.
It'd make sense to want to stand out if the staff read a lot of essays per day. You don't want yours to be included with the uninteresting "same-old" pile.
