OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
Answer:
1.Ordered, waged, dismissed
Explanation:
The answer is A.which aspects of the topic to discuss, because you want to make sure every part of your topic fits in your presentation kk??
The answer is b. hope i helped :D
Answer:
Do what is required.
Explanation:
The word "fulfill" is a verb meaning the act of attaining, carrying out, achieving, or performing what is required. It is the act of doing what is needed, getting it done.
To fulfill is to make sure that what is required is done, achieved, and completed. It ensures that all requirements are satisfied and performed, attained.
Thus, the correct answer is the third option.