“You are wasting time”
I think this is how it should be, hope this helps ♥︎
I think I do--
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1. I believe its youthful energy and life.
2. Repetition? Not sure.
3. The "fire in my head" symbolizes the intense drive to go fishing.
4. The mood is defiant. He will prove the reader wrong by finding her.
5. It establishes a mournful, weeping tone.
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