Question

Please use this space to list or discuss your activities other than academic work during the last several years (for example: school organizations, jobs, athletics, the arts, community service, religious groups, or other individual interests).
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Answer 1

The correct answer to this open question is the following.

I am a person who really enjoys doing different things besides academics. I think the school has to be complemented by a series of extracurricular activities that help improve the student experience.

That is why I have been involved in many different activities during the last several years. For instance, I love sports. Athletics is one of my favorite activities, especially football. I love football and I have been a member of the varsity team. I really enjoy the competition and preparation.

My father has told me that job experience is also a good thing to include in my preparation as a student. So during summertime, I have applied to some jobs for students. I have worked as a salesman associated in a bookstore and as a waiter in a fast-food restaurant. I have gained some experience and some extra cash for my own things.

I am not so active in religious groups, but I like to do some community service. My family has taught me to show appreciation to the gifts of life, and that is why I like to share some of my time helping in my community.

Finally, two years ago I started to get some classical music lessons. Piano, to be more specific. However, is so demanding and often I do not have the perseverance and dedication to show a total commitment to my piano lessons.