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I was wondering if you had an extra heart. Because mine was just stolen.
Explanation:
Answer:
Cheesy adjectives and add many many unnecessarily fluffy descriptions
Explanation:
All you need to do is maybe replace "felt happy" with "her heart pounded with happiness"/"walked down the school hallway" to "excitedly waltzed down the hallway and into the basking rays of the radiant sun" or something of the such and some dialogue lines in between Denise and her mom.
I think you'll be fine for vivid descriptions and strong imagery as long as you elaborate on Denise's feelings a bit more. I'll give you some bits you can use: "a warm smile", "stomach fluttered", "'I'm proud of the results of my hard work!'"
Anything cheesy should be perfectly enough to satisfy your teacher.
(Apologies that I have not given you a paragraph to copy-paste. Hopefully these pointers can guide you a bit :))
Just fake it, write something about how you didn't study for a test and you failed and you learned that you have to study for tests. Then you aced the final exam because you studied a lot and it really paid off. If you're in 9th grade or below, teachers will eat that sh*t up
It is D! The art of persuasion, I saw it in the dictionary
They imply figurative language because they make comparisons and give you a way to envision what they are seeing and feeling.
