<span> 1. correct language 2. no jargon 3. vivid language 4. tone.</span>
The argument is ineffective and can be improved significantly. First of all, he writes the claim in the first person. A formal persuasive essay should be in the form of third person. The author can improve his support by using less opinions and back-up his thesis with facts and evidence and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author also does not efficiently connect his essay. There is no cohesion and his diction is weak. He can improve it by using stronger vocabulary.
A prolific diarist is a pepys
C
Explanation:
A claim of policy argues that certain conditions should exist, or that something should or shouldn’t be done
Armstrong chose to talk to Lombard rather than Wargrave because Armstrong feels that Wargrave is too old to help. This situation described in Agatha Christie's mystery novel titled "And Then There Were None". The novel is about a number of people trapped on an island and there was a murder situation among those people.
