I think it sounds really good you might want to add a little bit more to it but it is your opinion, not ours...
The tree was hit with the stick by kumar
Incorporate what? if you mean their selfs then i would say by giving a spice of them self or make their story have some character that relates to them, but then again the story itself is them already.
Answer:
my happiest memory is when I was little I went to (insert place) with ( insert family member) and we ended up getting lost on are way back home and had to drive around for an hour because we got on the wrong road.
Explanation:
really you just have to tell a story and hopefully it is happy
MY OWN WORDS: Ominous means strange or creepy, as if you have a bad feeling about something.
DEFINITION: giving the impression that something bad or unpleasant is going to happen; threatening; inauspicious.
May I have brainliest please? :)