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guajiro [1.7K]
3 years ago
7

Which error in the sentence should be corrected while revising?

English
2 answers:
tekilochka [14]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

Run on sentence

Explanation:

He needs punctuation after the I read over his shoulder.  It could potentially be: My friend blogged and I read over his shoulder, what he wrote it was good.

Effectus [21]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

D- wordiness

Explanation:

hope this helped. :))

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