A lot of descriptive imagery, excellent setting and sophisticated language. Use of punctuation is varied and concise which effectively engages the readers to continue reading.
One problem is sentence length. No examiner wants to mark your exam and immediately get hit in the face with a chunk of words. Separate your paragraphs individually.
Answer:Why do Jessie Prescott and her parents eat macaroni and chesse so often.
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LOL when i was running away from a bee and then i ran into a car i was crying of embarrasment
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Can you at least put a picture or write some of the paragraphs that showed a bit of the grandmothers opinion about there vacation that would help me and answer that question that your stuck on.
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1. We live east of the river.
2. Living in the midwest gives one a different view of the world.
3. The two scientists disagreed about the impact of the comet.
4. If you drive far enough north, you will avpid the traffic jams.
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this is the answer.. dot know if ots correct or not.. but i tried my best