High school graduates should be required to take off time before entering college. How can this thesis statement be improved? Hi
gh school graduates should be required to take off time to pursue community service projects before entering college. High school graduates should be required to take off one year to pursue community service projects like cleaning trash, teaching at an at-risk school, and building homes for the poor before entering college. High school graduates should be required to take off time to learn about the real world before entering college. High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness.
The first quotation has the characteristics of Realism which are objective writing, non-poetic diction and trustworthy events that are realistically described with a lot of details. In this excerpt, we can see a detailed description of the man who had been killed.
The second quotation has Idealism characteristics and the main characteristic of it is the spirit and after that logic and nature described in a poetic way.
