I’m sorry i can’t see anything maybe repost it
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
The answer is are because its a verb that is stating something.
The correct answer is option A. "Emotion and logic". An effective argument should convince or persuade the audience about the topic that is discussed. In order to be persuasive, an effective argument must appeal to emotion and logic, making the audience to feel and think what the speaker wants to transmit.
What’s the prompt and question? Is this the whole article can u send me more of the story
