The most obvious difference is that academic writing is nonfiction, while entertainment writing is fiction.
Answer:
If that is your write it looks pretty great,but if you want to make it more better use grammarly
Explanation:
I'll just rewrite the sentence how it's supposed to sound...
My bike tire was low, i wasn't surprised that it went flat just as it began to rain.
A state of being. A verb would be: Still or Quiet
