Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!
I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.
Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.
Answer: The sun
Explanation: "The" article is always used on celestial bodies for example: the earth, the moon etc.
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C. US should oppose hitler even if he declares it as an act of war
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C. The emphasis on the beauty of nature is the trait <span>typical of the romantic era that is brought out in Washington Irving's short story "The Devil and Tom Walker". </span>
