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Serjik [45]
3 years ago
14

Hey please tell me if that is good enough or I can improve it I’ll give brainliest!

English
2 answers:
babunello [35]3 years ago
6 0

Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!

I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.

Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.

Hunter-Best [27]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

you did a great job loved it !

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