Question

Hi, so today I have to write an essay about how choir has helped me. ( it has helped with my shyness, self-confidence, my singing voice and helps with stress) and I need a really good thesis and begging sentence plz help.

Answer 1

Growing up i've alwasys been a really shy, and conserved person, i didn't associate with many people, and i kept to myself. That was until i found choir, immediatley i fell in love, it made feel confident, and gave me the courage to talk to other people and be myself...