I would say the first one, but im not sure if im right. hope it helps
A sentence can need revision when the subject and verb do not agree.
<h3>What is revision?</h3>
Revision involves writing a particular word in a new way.
This can be done to add some keywords that are missing or modify a particular sentence to include appropriate verb.
Therefore,
A sentence can need revision when the subject and verb do not agree
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No I would say that neither are good but Jones at least didn't use whips or stuff like that. Napoleon tried stealing ideas from other people and killed lots of animals.
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B.) They notice and point.