Answer:
This sentence is incorrect.
Explanation:
The sentence is incorrect because there isn't supposed to be a comma after "loves". Also, there is no form of punctuation after the last word of your sentence.
No it’s not inappropriate at all u just stating facts
I'm sure I can help now
Japanese:
wata-shi w-a ima tasu-keru koto g-a de-keru koto o kak -un -in shi -te imu
I think that's mostly right not that good at Japanese either