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Answer:
I would say that "The main problem is that Hansel and Gretal's Father was tricked into thinking that his children would actually come back to him.
Oh and I would also change it by changing the fact that you wrote that "... it was actually the kids fault for running away.
And actually, The Mother <u><em>did</em></u> abandon her kids. When she tricked Hansel and Gretal's Father and abandoned the 2 kids.
Hope you like it! ;-)
