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Leokris [45]
4 years ago
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3. Revise this paragraph from the essay on vegetarianism, which focuses on one of the claim's supporting reasons. As you revise

the paragraph, focus on:
making sure the point of the paragraph is precise and related to the overall claim in the essay,
using words, phrases, and clauses to link major ideas in the paragraph,
organizing ideas in a logical way,
stating and addressing a counterclaim,
maintaining a formal style and objective tone, and
correcting MLA citation errors.
Underline any portions of the original paragraph that you include in your version of the paragraph. (30 points).
English
1 answer:
Alexus [3.1K]4 years ago
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Answer:

Explanation:

Vegetarians meet the nutrient requirements from eating from a variety of foods within different food groups (fruits, vegetables, grains, proteins). Although, No More Vegetarians claims vegetarians are not healthy because they do not meet protein requirements (Evans 22). Contrary to this book, vegetarians get adequate levels of protein through beans, tofu, legumes, and protein-rich grains. Furthermore, Tim Over, a nutritionist, has found that people who rarely consume meat in their diets are much less likely to become sick than those who regularly eat meat (Tim Over 66). For, plant foods are a reliable source of energy that the human body relies on to maintain proper health (Vegetarianism for Everyone 45). It is a well-known belief inside the nutrition field that vegetarianism is sustainable whilst being healthy.

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