Sleepy Time (Chocolate)
<em>Her yawns was as sweet as the song of a bird.</em>
<em>Her brown, long hair flowed in the air.</em>
<em>Her chocolate eyes are now blurred.</em>
<em>Her skin was smooth and fair.</em>
<em>She lays her heavy head on the soft pillow.</em>
<em>The moonlight inside her room was in full glow.</em>
The thesis statement is at the end of the introduction paragraph, and summarizes the whole essay.
Teacher B is correct.
The only wrong ones is the first on and the last one. The first one you forgot to put a comma after but. The last one you forgot to put a comma after eggs, pancakes, and things. I hope this helps you!
Those types of dogs are called Avalanche Rescure Doggies
