You could ask what kind of words are they using? And how are they presenting something?
example: I went to the store.
The dangers of walking to that building to buy necessary equipment to survival were all lined up in front of me, but I shook them aside.
Feminism
Similarities and Difference of Men and Women
How men treat women
Am I supposed to care what the kids at a little old place like Wilson School wear?" (The Egypt Girls, page 39)
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"But a bright and beautiful blur, no matter how distant, was better than a reality that was dull and gray." (The Egypt Girls, page 51)</span>
You gotta make sure first every sentence are correct after keep writing about what you're doing
