Answer:
Dear diary,
Today I saw a horrible quarrel between my peers.
It was over something as little as a dollar, the two very young boys made a bet, the bet was to see who could spit further away, the reward for spitting the furthest was one dollar. After the game was over and the winner was declared the little boy, he then presented the prize 4 quarters, the other child who had a lack of education was expecting a $1 bill not four quarters, the angry young boy then assaulted the other child who presented the 4 quarters. A ghastly fight then broke out.
Explanation:
To avoid this conflict in the future children should come to an agreement and should be made to get an education.
(Im sure I haven’t found them all but here are the ones I spotted)
1- Extinction
2- wild
3- remove the comma (by the turn of the century)
4- destroying their habitats
5- valued
6- skins
7- Though, trading tiger skins (comma)
8- (in my opinion this could be reworded) Although
9- (capitalize) Traditional
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1- queen
2- structures
3- (comma) across the ages, castles...
4- (commas) changed, developed, and eventually.....
5- retreat
6- offensive
7- (remove commas) summoned to organize around and deployed
(I’m sure I didn’t some of them correct )
1. Fatten
2.favorable
3. Extensively
4. Forgotten
5. Freedom
6. Management
7. Is different
8. Dangerous
9. Flying
10. Dreadfully
11. Disturbances
12. Silklike
13. Dictates
14. Extinction
15. Employment
16. Alarming
17. Awareness
18. Advisable
19. Artists
20. Contested red