It's one who is awake, standing up, and presumably alert
to the wishes and commands of the Lord.
English Empire was something which british people have taken over in the past centuries.
It matters at to how the person was brought up, if they were brought up wealthy and managed to lose the money then it would contribute a lot. It would make their lives hard.
Answer:
I changed around some syntax in your reasons to make them stronger.
Intro:
Hook [eSports is becoming increasingly prominent in pop culture]. Thesis [therefore, eSports should be considered a school sport]. Reasons [cognitive: Problem solving & strategy skill development. Social Development. Entertainment and art.]
BP1: reason 1 [Cognitive: Problem solving & strategy skill development]. explain [it is important to develop these skills because...]
BP2: reason 2 [Social Development]. explain [it helps students develop socially by..... and it is important to develop socially because....]
BP3: reason 3 [entertainment and art]. explain [these are important because....]
BP4: counterargument [some people think eSports should not be a school sport because ______. But their reasoning is weak because _____]
Conclusion: restate reasons, then thesis, but phrase things differently than you already did to keep things interesting.
