On the picture below with the hooded figure around the little boy. Gives off this unsettling feeling of protection but very aggressive. While the boy seems unbothered, I feel like the little boy have seen this hooded figure plenty of times to just be comfortable with it, especially letting the hooded figure letting it hug him. As it is a little boy this hooded figure is somehow either protecting or being abit territorial, I feel like it could be a relative to this boy he was very close to, or if not a mother who lost his son in a tragic moment and feels like the boy reminds her of his late son. Who she cherish alot, with memories and love, but with the process of protecting the little boy, she seems either very aggressive and territorial.
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I believe the comma should go here:
<span>"I saw three kids sitting on the porch, across the street."
"Across the street" is a sentence fragment. These are typically separated from the rest of the sentence with a comma. Sentence fragments may seem like sentences, but you couldn't make it it's own sentence, since it doesn't contain a verb. A sentence must have a verb and a subject in order to be considered valid, and in the case of fragments, they're purely there to add more to the current sentence.
I hope this helped you out! Feel free to ask me any additional questions if you have any. :-)</span>
The last sentence of the first paragraph
F. Scott Fitzgerald wrote the great gatsby
