Awesomeeeee also what school lol
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
B
Explanation:
it is constantly gaining speed
1)too disturbing to watch.
2)speeding through the red light.
3)all the people entered the theatre.
4)asking me many questions.
5)a hate letter.
6)she needed to help find a giraffe that had escaped.
7)clear her calender.
8)asking for any extra credit work available.
9)she has everything organized and placed neatly.
10)his brother didn't treat him nicely.
