I'm really good at this but on number 1: it makes the sentence sound interesting. I know I did not help but I just want to give you an idea.
Which best explains why Arnall wanted to give 18-year-olds the right to vote?
His son was 18 years old and he felt he should vote.
He wanted to pay back young people for their support.
He wanted to teach the old power structure a lesson.
He felt if you could fight in a war, you should be allowed to vote in elections.
What Katie is worried about at the beginning of The Shakespeare Mix-Up is the speech she has to give tomorrow.
She is learning some facts about Shakespeare and is frightened about what her speech is going to look like the following day. She says to her mom that it is a very important speech and that her school career depends on it.
<span><span>toneforceful, logicalforceful, impassioned</span><span>purposeto present opposing arguments in order to refute a viewpointto state an opinion</span><span>structureshort sections stating different key ideasexpert opinion interwoven with historical data and anecdotes</span><span>opinionCarbon dioxide emissions are beneficial rather than harmful.Historical data does not show a problem from increased fossil fuel use. On the contrary, to improve the human experience, people everywhere should be able to use cheap fuels.</span><span>persuasive techniquesscientific data, appeal to logicscientific data, expert opinion, emotional appeal</span><span>textual evidence for persuasive techniques<span>scientific data:
“As presently constituted, earth's atmosphere contains only 370 parts per million (ppm) of the colorless and odorless gas we call carbon dioxide.”appeal to logic:
“If, then, the climate models cannot correctly predict what should be relatively easy for them to correctly predict (the effect of global warming on extreme weather events), why should we believe what they say about something infinitely more complex (the effect of a rise in the air's CO2 content on mean global air temperature)?” </span><span>scientific data:
chart showing increase in human life span because of technological progressemotional appeal:
speaker's reference to his grandson</span></span><span>influence of persuasive techniquesleaves the reader with a sense that there is no room for further debate<span>short, direct presentation makes a favorable impact on the viewer, but the relevance to the issue is not clear</span></span></span>
Here is the task to do:
<span>rewrite this correcting fragments and run on sentences can someone check my work below the original.</span>
Scientist reports <span>that creatures living in the deep sea are in danger of starving to death. Millions of undiscovered species live in the deep sea. Creatures in the seabed are suffering from growing food shortages, which may be a result of rising sea temperatures. Scientist believes </span><span>that some species will die out, and those that can survive on a low food supply will continue living. Not much is known about the creatures that live in the deep sea, and not much is known about the changes in their diets.</span><span> Scientist estimates </span>that up to 10 million species live in the depths of the sea. Most animals of the deep rely on food chains that begin in the lighted realms of the sea. Microscopic plants called Phytoplankton capture the sun and start the food cycle. Wherever there are animal droppings, there is a constant rain of organic matter that feeds the bottom <span>dwellers.</span>
