A good paragraph is about structure. Use the PEEL method when writing your paragraph.
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• Each of your paragraphs should contain the following:
– Point
– Evidence
– Explanation
– Link
Well it relates because they are trying to find something to help them through the hard times that is happening. when the thief comes in it caused tension.
They should both restate the claim. Your conclusion could have a Call To Action which tells the reader that you are giving a reference to him/her.
Holden expresses to not be a depresing persoaon but a happy person