Answer: Do I see that the writer tried to add style to the essay?
Do I notice that the writer tries to engage readers?
Explanation:
Answer: The answer is, Julie and Yan are watching the moon because they are night owls. Sorry First I gave the wrong answer I read it wrong
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ppreciate
only after appropriate syllables do you hyphenate
Real facts
don't make it so boring
good transitions
a good hook and conclusion
include a thesis statement