Question

I need help with my conclusion.

Answer 1

Answer:

(I can't really say anything specific to help you out, since i don't know what your conclusion is supposed to be based off of) Here's some tips tho:

Explanation:

What is a conclusion paragraph?

• A conclusion is what you will leave with your reader

• It “wraps up” your essay

• It demonstrates to the reader that you accomplished what you set out to do

• It shows how you have proved your thesis

• It provides the reader with a sense of closure on the topic

What to include:

• Your conclusion wraps up your essay in a tidy package and brings it home for your reader

• Your topic sentence should summarize what you said in your thesis statement

• Do not simply restate your thesis statement, as that would be redundant. Rephrase the thesis statement with fresh and deeper understanding

• Your conclusion is no place to bring up new ideas

• Your supporting sentences should summarize what you have already said in the body of your essay

• If a brilliant idea tries to sneak into the final paragraph, you must pluck it out and let it have its own paragraph in the body, or leave it out completely

• Your topic for each body paragraph should be summarized in the conclusion

• Wrap up the main points

• Your closing sentence have a sense of closure

• Your closing sentence is your 'last word' on the subject; it is your “clincher”

• Demonstrate the importance of your ideas

• Propel your reader to a new view of the subject. Maybe End on a positive note

Answer 2

Answer:

so send the question..

Explanation:

please.