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The sentence that includes precise and clear word choices is the first one: The tin roof shone in the sun, and the front lawn was green and inviting.
You can see here that the description is quite vivid and complete, so that we can even imagine what the house and the lawn look like - Janice used descriptive words such as tin, front, green, and inviting to portray the entire picture.
It should be "I will be" because this sentence is past tense. Meaning the "I will be" would be in the future. And since those are the answers 'I will be' would be the the answer. Which means the sentenced corrected would be: I was happy to help you in the garden when I came to visit you last month.
I woke up in the woods alone just stranded in the middle of nowhere nothing to be seen but just tall trees and insects crawling on me. Suddenly I felt as if I were being watched, I looked back and next thing I knew a thin, slimy arm reached out from behind the leaves of a bush, I slowly then saw a scaly green leg and tried dragging me across the woods. I was able to escape and I ran as fast as I could and I never looked back.
Hope this helps!!
