I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
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Tag questions turn a statement into a question. They are often used for checking information that we think we know is true.
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For example: It's cold (positive), isn't it (negative)? And: It isn't cold (negative), is it (positive)?
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Put a period after: later on got called "The Shot".
Where you say "Another reason is if your watching" - the your is you're
Get rid of "could" in your last sentence. it will make you seem more confident.
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It looks good otherwise!
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people create change by dreaming and making them come true. Martin Luther King Jr. created change for racism. He dreamt and then he fulfilled his dream
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