Inquires about the temperature at which paper would catch fire, Bradbury had been told that 451 °F (233 °C) was the autoignition temperature of paper. So talking about death probably the death of the books? Weather conditions do not play a significant role in the setting of the story and are rarely mentioned throughout the text. One of the few times weather conditions are mentioned in the novel is towards the beginning of the story when Montag initially meets Clarisse. The night Montag meets Clarisse, she has a significant impact on him and he immediately begins contemplating his happiness. After coming home to discover that his wife has overdosed on pills, Montag contemplates Clarrise, her uncle, and Mildred as it begins to rain. Bradbury writes, “Rain. The storm. The uncle laughing. Thunder falling downstairs. The whole world pouring down. The fire gushing up in a volcano. All rushing on down around in a spouting roar and rivering stream toward morning”.
In order to use more precise language, the underlined phrase entitled (7) should be changed to A: inaugural.
Then, the proper phrase would be:
Olympic marathoner Jeff Galloway won the inaugural race in 1970 when traffic was not even blocked off for the race, and runners had to run in the far right-hand lane.
Other punctuation marks are used for other reasons such as ending a sentence or instead of a missing letter and in contractions. Commas are used in front of conjunctions such as the oxford comma used before and.