Answer:
using complete, grammatically correct sentences.
Explanation:
if you use complete sentences then it is will help improve sentence fluency.
The answer: B. Use of Colloquialism or dialect
Colloquialism: a word or phrase that is not formal or literary and is used in ordinary or familiar conversation.
1. Of course you get more risks of being affected by storms, tsunamis, etc.
2. Then, you'd have to deal with people or beach-goers - they're not always nice to be around, aren't they? o_O
3. Last, what I don't like about living near the sea is the salt in the air/sea spray whatever.
It doesn't do any good to the skin and the hair and of course to anything metal in the house.
But, honestly, having a house near the sea is a great (and beautiful) privilege. :)
Here, I think the advantages weigh more
Paragraph 1.
"Oh!," said Goldilocks, "the controlling idea is too vague. As a reader, I can't tell what your essay will really be about. When writing a controlling idea you want to be specific."
Paragraph 2.
"Oh my," exclaimed Goldilocks. "This controlling idea is too wordy. A controlling idea should be clear and concise. That was I will know what your essay is about."
Paragraph 3.
"Well, well," Goldilocks said. "this controlling idea doesn't address the prompt. When you look at what it is asking you to write, don't you see how it is asking you to explain the importance? This just says it is is important. But I do like how you thought of another word that means to not give up!"
