I would, but there's a high possibility what I write will be used. I wish you luck on the theme though :>
Let's reconstruct this sentence.
"Everyone I know complain" doesn't make much sense.
Popping an "s" on the end of "complain" might do the trick, lets try!
"Everyone I know complains" ah, there we go. Much smoother.
Next section!
"Complains because these days backpacks weigh a ton."
Though this may sound correct, it is still quite a bunch. Let's fix that.
Rearranging your words might work.
Maybe in the section that says "Complains because these days" we can change that to "Complains these days because" Much smoother, and easier to read.
We have so far is: "Everyone I know complains these days because"
Yay, let's continue.
The remaining of the sentence is fine so we can put it on the end of our freshly constructed sentence.
Our final sentence should be:
"Everyone I know complains these days because backpacks weigh a ton."
The Little Brown Rabbit:
The little brown rabbit sits inside his burrow.
Until it is quiet and still.
His brown fur sticks up and starting to furrow.
He leaps out and runs to the hill.
He nibbles on the bush.
He goes to the pond to drink
But, one little sound makes him rush
You will miss him if you blink.
Hope this helps! You can change it if necessary!
It's "C: A cobra; the snake foretells a warning of danger to come." Kali mentions that they are sacred and should not have been killed. This foreshadow represents a warning.
