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It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
Four challenges that could impact domestic tourism could include natural disasters like forest fires keeping people out of an area due to the danger to life and limb, social unrest such as in Venezuela right now with the violence of the right wing in Caracas especially, poor economy with high unemployment so that many people can't afford to travel even locally, and seasonal activities that can only be done in certain parts of the year like boating in the summer and skiing in the winter.
