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Yes, there is a mistake.
The answer is, All people are not hardworking.
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It can help in a variety of ways in your day-to-day life. Simple tasks such as writing down a list of groceries to buy, or even writing down your own thoughts.
Overall, writing outside of school has a handful of advantages <3
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Gold represents innocence and childhood. The phrase "Nothing gold can stay" means that nothing can stay young forever. People will age no matter what; people will lose their innocence no matter what. In the letter Johnny left Ponyboy inside the copy of Gone With The Wind, he says, "I've been thinking about it, and that poem, that guy that wrote it, he meant you're gold when you're a kid, like green. When you're a kid everything's new, dawn. It's just when you get used to everything that it's day."
This poem relates to The Outsiders because Ponyboy Curtis was just fourteen-years-old and was already facing so much in his life: murder case, parentless, brotherhood. Ponyboy has seen and heard too much to be innocent, yet he is not dirty. All this is making Ponyboy "lose" his "goldness", yet there is so much that Ponyboy is doing that keeps him gold, such as watching sunsets. Ponyboy has a childlike view of the world, and when Johnny tells him to "stay gold", he wants Ponyboy to stay this way and to never let go of these young, innocent things.
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Everything looks good so far, label the last paragraph as conclusion.
Make sure to note where the thesis is restated.
"For instance, they can make squeaky noises...etc" is something you can highlight and label as an example/supporting detail. Same goes for your examples in your other body paragraphs.
If its your essay just double check that it transitions smoothly, and you're good to go!
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